I am pure efficiency, stream-lined woman, down to zero. For all my reducing, I can not eliminate my feelings, my need, my deep-seated ache. I have made myself thin to gone and still they declare their presence. My body reverberates, full to explosion, expansion pain unbearable.
I declare, declare, declare, words my release, my search for relief, for truth. Once spoken should be enough, but it is not, I am on repeat, all ache and repeat, ache and repeat.
I am here and here is bright and public, no space for me to stuff everything away. I need to keep yelling my feelings, my feelings, YES! I have feelings. I, who pretended she didn’t. I, who took care of everyone and made sure to always be okay. I have silenced myself for too long and the eruption is happening. I am an explosion thirty years in the build-up. I can not stop the fire, the red bleed, my bursting feelings, my demanding needs.
I erupt, erupt, erupt, an explosive display, all mess and fury. It is force, growing to burst. It is raw, uncontrollable, unpredictable, chaotic, and organic – it is birth.
i love the way you speak.
declare, declare.
it reminds me of that poem by Dylan Thomas: “do not go gentle into that good night…rage, rage, against the dying of the light.”
it’s one of my favourites and it’s glorious. you feel this passion, this power as you speak this power aloud to the darkness, raging against Light’s death and never allowing you hear to flood with night.
speak loud, dearheart.
“do not go gentle into the good night …rage, rage, against the dying of the light” Wow. That is gorgeous. Sometimes I think myself crazy and stubborn because I can’t go gentle into most anything, I seem to fight, fight, fight. Seriously, I can’t give up!
Rachel, I feel I shouldn’t need the encouragement, but I do – thank you for your comment.
http://dramaticelegance.blogspot.com/2011/12/rage-light.html
you pushed me to write this, dear one. this post that screamed in my silence. bless you for touching my soul with these beauties.
rage with me, sister, against the dying of the Light